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2004-06-23 - 2:38 p.m.

Another story courtesy of my friend connor, who is teaching english in seoul.

"Hot Day"

It was the hottest day of the year. Nobody wanted to

do anything. The streets were empty. In the depths of

the afternoon, around 3 o'clock, ominously, even the

cicadas shut up. Up and down the streets of the town

there was silence. Nothing moved.

Inside an air-conditioned hardware store on the town's

main street, kittycorner from a movie theater and

across from a stand of saggy, peeling old Victorian

homes, two men sat behind the counter and watched the

broiling street through the shop's tinted windows. One

of them sipped on a Dr. Pepper. Their names were Claud

and Jeff. They were brothers.

No one had been in their store since nearly two hours

before, when Daniel from the American Family

restaurant had come in and bought a pair of pliars.

"The air-conditioner's broken," he said. Since then

there had been nothing. It looked likely that no one

else would be in at all.

Jeff, who owned the store and the building, was going

to keep the place open until seven anyway, "Just to

see if anyone else comes in." He had nothing else to

do.

Claud, who was three years younger and did not want to

stay at the store for no reason, had better things in

mind. "It's stupid to stay in here today," he said.

"Let's close up and go to the lake."

Jeff shook his head. "I'm not going swimming today."

"Why not?"

Jeff gestured out the window. "It's so hot out there

today, you'd get so sweaty, you'd never dry off after

you got out of the water."

"So?"

"I hate that feeling."

There was a pause.

"You're a sissy," said Claud.

"You don't have to stay here," said Jeff, turning his

head to face his brother. "You can go swimming all you

want. Be my guest. The shop doesn't need two people

today."

Claud nodded and made a thoughtful face. But he made

no preparations to leave. Both men returned their

attention to the empty street. Claud had finished his

Dr. Pepper. He crushed the can and wandered into the

darkness at the rear part of the store. A refrigerator

door opened. A can popped open. Claud returned to the

counter with a fresh can of soda.

"By the way, Jeff," he said, "what day is it?"

"Why do you ask?"

"No reason."

After a pause that was long enough to make his brother

think he'd forgotten the question, Jeff said, "It's

Wednesday."

"Ah," said Claud. "Are there any OTHER reasons why you

want to sit here in an empty store all afternoon by

yourself, besides that you don't want to get all

sweaty?"

"Yeah. I'm a businessman. I don't want to lose

customers. You should know that. You work here too."

"What about any... OTHER reasons?"

"What are you talking about?"

"You know what I'm talking about."

Jeff said nothing.

After a second Claud continued. "All right, then,

maybe you do just want to stay here for the sake of

business. But you said it yourself earlier, no one

else is coming in today. At least, not enough people

to pay for the cost of air-conditioning for the rest

of the afternoon. How's that for a business decision?

Let's get out of here."

"I told you you could go."

"I don't want to go to the lake alone."

"Fine." Jeff sighed in exasperation. "I'll close up

and drive over with you. But you have to give me an

hour here first."

Claud was exasperated too. He wanted to go swimming.

"And what are you planning to do with another hour in

this helltrap? Give yourself a manicure?"

"I'm gonna stay right here and watch this street."

Suddenly, after he said it, a strange sort of

determined look came into Jeff's face. And as Claud

watched, a suppressed little smile crept in to the

corners of his mouth, too, as if he had some minor

troublemaking in mind.

"Aaah," said Claud.

Jeff continued to almost smile, his eyes fixed on the

street.

"So there IS another reason," said Claud.

"I'm just... curious," said Jeff at last.

"You are going to be disappointed," said Claud.

"If she's not out in an hour," said Jeff, "then she's

not coming out at all. I'll come out to the lake with

you then. But I'm giving her that hour first."

Claud settled himself into his chair. "What time does

she usually come out?"

"On Wednesdays? About three."

"It's four-thirty."

"I know. She hasn't missed a Wednesday since Memorial

Day weekend, though."

"It's a hot day."

Jeff nodded in agreement. The brothers fell silent,

but there was a renewed sense of excitement in the

air. Claud continued to sip noisily at his can of

soda, and began to tap rhythmically on the counter

with his fingertips. Jeff leaned his chair back and

scanned the street, following the occassional

lonesome, sun-blistered car acros the face of the

window. Eventually Claud picked up a magazine and

settled in to wait.

After forty minutes the scene beyond the windows had

not changed, and Claud was growing restless. Even Jeff

was beginning to shift positions and glance at the

clock.

"I don't think it's going to happen today," said

Claud.

"Could be," said Jeff.

"It's too hot."

"She's been out in hot weather before."

"Not this hot."

They waited then in silence for ten more minutes, and

then could stand it no longer. Jeff stood up slowly

and made a wry face. He stretched. He turned and

looked at his brother.

But his brother was not looking at him.

It was exactly then, at five-twenty in the afternoon

of the very hottest day of the year, that something

miraculous had occurred.

Inside the hardware store, Jeff followed his brother's

gaze. He stopped and his eyes grew wide. He sat back

down. All four eyes within the hardware store were

focused on the front door of the second house acros

the street.

The door was opening.

As the brothers watched raptly from their little

air-conditioned store, a woman, a short, stocky woman

with dark brown hair and a small pair of shorts,

emerged from the house. She was about thirty-two or

thirty-three years old. Although her build was thick,

she was pretty. No one would call her fat. She carried

herself well. Very well.

The woman walked around to the side of the house and,

with some effort, pulled out a push lawnmower from the

space between her house and the next.

Still watched unmercifully by the brothers, she

manouvered the mower into the center of her little

lawn, which sloped gently until it met a concrete

retaining wall by the street, and a little set of

concrete steps in the wall.

There, this woman stopped and absolutely naturally

removed her shirt. Underneath her shirt was a sports

bra. It was sky blue.

Inside the hardware store, the brothers whooped and

hollered.

You could not hear them doing so from the street, but

the woman did something funny then. She wiped her

brow, which was already glistening with sweat, and

fanned herself briefly with her hand, then turned to

face the hardware store directly. For a few moments

she peered in the window intently, although she could

not see anything in it but her own reflection and the

reflection of the houses and the street. Then, very

deliberately, she bent forward very slightly, and

waved.

And then she tied her hair behind her head, and she

set to work mowing the lawn.

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